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Old 03-11-04, 11:58 AM   #11
DirtBoy69
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breakdown:

authentic's verse:

flow:i had problems finding it really wasn't that tight probably the worst part of the verse 5/10

volcab: some good rhyming nothing too complex gets the job done overall 6/10

punches: i don't know didn't really see anything here it seemed like you spent more time rapping bout how you were better then actually disses afterword. best line was "who probaly never leave town and sleep in night gowns" i'd give 3/10

personals: nothing to say none 0/10

overall:14/40

afterword's verse:

flow:amazing utterly destoryed authentic all those multis in the first bars just great overall 9/10 best part of the verse

volcab: the first bars were great with all those huge words afterwards you settled down into average but still top notch 9/10

punches: nothing to direct but enough to get past authentic fav line was, "And your flows is as authentic As a porno chic with silicon tits, teaching kindergarten/" sick you hurt the guy with that 8/10


personals: all over this part most of the lines directed at authentic and not your self or just general punches good job 7/10

overall: great verse you really handed this guy his heart after you ripped it out 33/40

vote goes to afterword, authentic did alright but was really outmatched here
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