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Old 03-11-04, 02:21 PM   #7
DirtBoy69
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it's a shame that second verse is better anyway

breakdown of the truth's verse:

flow:it'd flowed nothing too complex kinda simple but it got the job done 7/10

punches:this is where you really lacked a couple of broad open throws but nothing personal, best line,"be like lil kim find a bridge then jump off/or u can put yo mouth on a barrel and let the pump off", mah? 3/10

volcab: not much here pretty simple nothing great 4/10

overall:14/30 it seemed like you really didn't try

breakdown of g-deuce's verse:

punches: not really direct you didn't have anything that made me say 'damn!' but you had enough to win my fav line,"I treat his gurl like the TWIX commercial but LEFT HIM OUT OF THE MIX!" i'd give 7/10

volcab: better then your oppenent but that's it. could of spent some more time here still good enough to win though 6/10

flow: good but not great i give you more points then your oppenent cause you had a slightly better complexity 8/10

overall:21/30

vote-- g-deuce while he won i really don't see another way to say it
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