yo halob got this one heres y..................

Halob: you had way better structure first of all and it was easier to read....
also im kinda fellin how you used his old battles against..............
you had some koo punches as well but you need to work a lil more on your
vocab but over all it was coo.........

code-187: Way to simple for me man you also did a lil bit of feedin but is coo....
you need to work more on ur vocab and metas and a lil more on your
punches.............

my vote= Halob

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