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Old 03-11-04, 10:49 PM   #8
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for d-meth's verse:

flow: solid through the whole verse nothing really mad about it 6/10

volcab: could of been stronger but it's atleast balanced through the whole verse 6/10

punches: there was a couple of non direct really general ones thrown nothing too personal, nothing that i thought really hurt snyper best line was probably, "ima rip dis bitches adam's apple out, throw it ta ma dogs an see if they like the juice," 5/10

overall:17/30 good verse but i don't think good enough to win here though

breakdown for snyper's verse:

flow:i don't think it was quite as good as meth's the long bars didn't really contain anything like multis to tighten it up which hurt it 5/10

volcab: in spots it was good like the lines,"You shoot blanks and end up like "rich alchoholics"...still got a round-to-fill/ I found-a-kill so why not give Meth competition alleviation/ I hold depreciation cus ya punches are "MT" like mountain abbreviations/*2* You're not-blazin..you better hope I'm off on my drop-placement/
But this mexican better guess-again...like chinese sex...this was all "cock-asian"/*3*" but outside of that it was average 6/10

punches: way better here then in meth's verse fav lines were quoted above already 8/10

overall: 19/30 good verse

vote-- close battle but i gotta give it to snyper just more and better punches
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