"Does The Third Degree Burns Dispersed From Heat
From Behind My Serpent Teeth
Make It Hurt To Breathe?"

- Liked that bit the best. Try to keep lines the same length - and make the bars fit in (e.g - 8, 16 or 32 Bars/Lines). Nice Vocabulary though.
Pe@ce

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Razer Vs Dagreatest

Text Record:
Will A Peer Vs Razer (5-2)
Tha*Reign*Man Vs Razer (0-5)
Puertoricanelly Vs Razer (0-5)
guyver4mk Vs Razer (0-3): (Gave Up)
Da Greatest Vs Razer (0-5)

4 Wins, 3 Knockouts, 1 Loss.