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Old 03-13-04, 02:43 PM   #12
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
Break'N It Down..

IP:

TheSinnister: 6/10
Your Ish Is Good, Flow Was There, You Just Need To Work On Metaphors and Multis, Plus Vocab Is Always Nice..But Good Job.

Best Line..
The weak rymes you use agaist me are made of dirt/
Im smokin you nigga cuz you the herb/

Halob: 4/10
Hmm...Well You Atleast Have Potential. I Mean Your Trying To Flip Shit But Your Having A Hard Time With Word Usuage...Just Keep Up The Work Pimp..You"ll Get To Where You Wanna Be..

Good Battle To Da Both!

~R~