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Old 03-13-04, 02:53 PM   #15
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Posts: 3,774
From: Pittsburgh, PA
Break'N It Down..

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No Offense To The Both Of You But This Battle Was Herb..

TheSinnister: 5/10
You Have The Right Mind-State But You Need To Word Your Ish Better and Flip It Around Into Metaphors..And Remember The Vocab Playa...Keep Up Da Dope Work..

Best Line = Alright magget, mabe you need a lil sign to settle this quick little lyric into ya mind/
You shoulden't try to cripple the nemisis with wack ass line before you get played like sega genisses n waste ya time

Avakanche: 5/10
I Don't Know If Your Doing A Topical or A Battle...But You Need The Same Shit Sinnister Needs...Just Keep Elevated..Also Good Job To You...

Vote: Sinnister For Acutally Doing A Battle and His Shit Was Better In Punch Ways..

~R~