SV, I liked your stuff but it kinda wandered off track, and the CAPS threw me off. It makes it seems as if you were YELLING it and decreased its potency. It seemed like you were going more for multies than punches/personals.

i have enuff vocab to take a teacher and outwit
ma rymez in time will go down in history
^^^ Very nice and clever
yo i'm basiccaly spitin to git in a cru
have all tha niggaz trynna holla like YODALAYHAYWHO
^^^ Thruthful etc.

However I preferred Yougstars' this time, nice everything really although you went off track a little too.

But overall very close, good work guys and girls. Keep it coming.

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