Well Youngstar*, You had crappy stucture, and you had really short lines... Work on that. You really had no punches, because you had to short of lines. No multies personals.

Disaster came with the punches. He really had nothing else. But it took the battle considering Young only had one good punch.

I really dont have that much to type except both ya'll need to work on bar length, Young work on structure and length.. If i had to pick a flow, I would pick Disasters. Neither ya'll came hard at all..

V/ DIsaster

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