iight... This is how it goes. S-killz ya lines were too short. and you dont need the dashes if there isnt a punch or word play. You had some punched but they were weak as hell. Besides that there was nothing. Work on your line length and try and fit in some multies and personals they give points to the verse.

lk.. Like always you have a nice verse. Some of the shit...was exactly that, but you had some nice punches and metas in there. I liked th eout of order thing. I think you should try and structure you shit more so its easier to read... instead of a paragraph make it spaced using Enter.

This was really a lopsided battle. lk took this in all categories that were availible in this battle. S-killz got eaten up... Just keep workin on what i mentioned and you'll get better S-killz.

V/LK

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