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Wellll...This is how it is... Young, You had better line length this time, and had some alright punches, good vocab(I write poetry and know vocab). You cam a little weak, but ya got hott potential. Keep at that.
Will, you dissed everything she had, but yet tried to diss her vocab and failed. Which is minus a couple of points, but you had some better punches. Wasnt feelin ya flow
young had a better flow then Will, I wasnt feelin it too much. She had better vocab then ya but weak punches. Will, work on ya flow you had nice punches though.
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