Thread: LoT v guyver
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Old 03-14-04, 04:01 PM   #7
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aight im hitting this up wit an honest vote

I state my name as MK, the name of my city/
And I represent it in its whole entireity
that was a horrible opener you strectched the ty just to rhyme its not always about the sound i mean you could have turned that line into a nice metaphor leading into your verses
I'll chase you like a dog into a tree/
An chop the shit down an break ya crown along with ya Hiney
that was just straight weak i know you can do better just put some thought into it be creative

Fear you? You have yet to win or even insult a cat in battle/
Leav you ill cause i spit 'sick-beef' like i eat 'Mad-Cow-Cattle'/
nice line very humorus you could have came wit something sicker to follow that though
So i question your proposition on your position/
Cause runnin and quittin is quicker then spitten an unfitten rhyme for winnin'/
nice use of multis but overall just like dj said you guys could do better if you cats trying to make a name and shit do it right not half ass seprate yourself's from the rest
guyver4mk - 3/10
Liquor of Tears - 5/10
my vote goes to LOT

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