Alright now... Here it is...guyver, i have to say nice battle to ya from ours. But on to this one. I see you lengthened your lines up a bit, but your punches didnt hit to hard. You spoke to down on yourself. Keep your aiming on him, unless you use something about yourself to punchem. You have too simple shit in there, no complexity at all. Try and think more into a rhyme, instead of using over used lines and other weak stuff.

lk, weakest verse i have seen you spit, usually you come punch filled, but this wasnt one of your greatest. You had some harder hitting punches then guyver, but they were weak. A little more complexity then him... Not by much though. The only thing i see you need work on is that you sometimes put the //'s after a word that doesnt rhyme the line before it. A little confusing, try and structure a little more.

Overall, i was feeling both ya'll flows the same... Not too good though. lk took the punches and metas. Nothing else in this battle to mention. No personals.

V/ lk

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