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Old 03-14-04, 06:07 PM   #8
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omfg i know i usually have a lot to say about battles... but this has nothing for me to talk about... Yung Duke, You had some good vocab and some good punches, feelin ya shit way more. You had a nice flow and line length. Way more complexity then lyrical.

Ok Chick... Ya said you need people in ya crew. I ain't hatin on ya, but elevate before ya makea crew. Ya have shit line length, shit punches, and some shit metas. You maybe hit him with weak personals, but thats it. Work on ya style(which means everything about ya style: Structure, how ya wanna punch, metas, personals, multies).
If ya do that you'll be good.

V/ Yung
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