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Old 03-15-04, 03:53 PM   #17
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yawn
 
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From: cNY
IP:

Ok...Here it goes... Lil Rip, I felt ya flow more, but you didnt punch at all, You just talked about how emcees are fake. I made 2 weak metas, but they didnt insult at all. You had a nice flow, not that great of structure.

dj, you had some weak ass punches, but ya finisher was a punch/personal which i liked. That last line is the only mentionable line in this battle. You had better structure, but i didnt feel you're flow as much.

Overall, dj work on ya flow, and try and get some more punches in there. Rip, definantly work on punches and metas.. both of you ened to work on punches metas and personals, if ya do that you'll have better rhymes...

V/dj em sce
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