I feel it, hear it in my head. Nice flow, odd, fun. Nothing that'd go platinum though (no offense intended). I don't know how much you care 'bout things like tenses, but the tripped up if they ever ran line I had to read twice. Should've been got tripped. Got and ran, get and run.

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Give away the stone. Let the oceans take and transmutate this cold and fated anchor.

Give away the stone. Let the waters kiss and transmutate these leaden grudges into gold.