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Old 03-15-04, 06:12 PM   #12
Wise Mynd
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From: New York.
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smokin dat blunt only endin yo life fastaa/
hiding from PRnelly only creates furtha disasta/
Bad opener here.
cuz i take more lifes than Mike Jackson takes lil boys virginity/
you scared now tellin homies ta get rid of me/
Seen the Mike Line to many times before.
but its koo cuz i take flight on niggaz that run in fear/
beat them silly til they no longa speak crystal clear/
ok line....
supervillain?? Ima supaHERO!/
beatchu so bad youll make more faces than Robert DeNiro!/
Not a great punch
and like trina i got 69 WAYS ta slaughta a G,so jus test me b,
and bloody carpets is how it will be
Not a good closer


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Supervillans verse:
yeah......ya feel high and mighty in your 'AIR FORCE ONES',
im the bully that took them from ya, now you got air force nones,
Dont like this opener either but ok then
prepare for war to come, four horsemen with swords and guns,
ridin' in to enforce that your corpse is gunned,
Ok line
with forces to your fortress, knock on your door in four hits,
then we storm in thun,
i'll leave ya 'DERRRTY', YOU 'HOT IN HERRRD ME'??? your not worthy,
im serving these squirrely rap cats that attack and try to burn me
Ok line i guess
for hurting them perfectly, BAND-AID over your heart.......
'cuz im hurting ya SPERRRITUALLY, SERRRVICIN' you SURRRGERY,
and i wont even CHERRRGE you a fee.....HERRRE, this ones all on me.
Another bad closer

Super villan barley gets my vote with a better structure and flow
peace
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