Hate to say it but Yung Duke did have that battle. Tho the first 2-4 lines were realy weak - Please never talk about dropping bombs and saddam..Its herbish and ive seen it tons of times! It was a solid verse with decent flow and Idea's.

Swo you seem to be using a bunch of big misplaced words, And your lack of capitals and basic punctuation make reading it choppy...No idea's basicly at all...

My vote. Yung Duke.

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