TheSinnister, you didnt need to do 50 lines to win this one, but ya, you had some good lines, but some of them didnt rhyme and it didnt sound right.

2.5/5

school boy, what you said did make sense but it was way too short, some lines were only like 2 - 3 words long, at least it sounded like you were thinking while you were typin and trying to flow which is good, could've been better.

1/5

My Vote.... TheSinnister