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I'm new at rappin, and need some help! Please somebody, help me!!!
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03-16-04, 10:09 AM
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soul.
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you have an humorous style which is good, but your flow could be better
you should try using multi-syllable rhyming
ex.
your first bars ends with
get torched in seconds/
your second would be
im sick wit torture methods/
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