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Prnelly slain on niggaz that fortify like they legends/
only way to teach a student is to teach um a lesson(restricted)/
[]Umm ok, Basic punch - is that? i dont get the restricted/lesson thing...[]
prnelly cant stop wont stop cuz he burn niggaz like a green thumb on plants/
one arm tied behind my back and you still cant stagga ma stance/
[]Green thumb and plants is a horrible metaphor...horrible! but its a metaphor...?
second line is decent if not good[]
repairin you teeth is impossible for even the tooth fairy,
re$tricted scare me?neva not even if u use every word in da dictionary/
[]Tooth fairy? Teeth? I can sort of get your punch but horribly worded...
second line also made no sence...[]
my lyrics cova me like peanut butter on bread/
restricted says fuck me? nigga ill slap you and turn yo face red/
[]Once again...Shitty basic punch...Hmmm catchy flow on that ONE LINE but only in the second half of it...[]
you couldnt cut me if yo blade was as sharp as my eye for victory/
Prnelly beatchu worse than a baby tryna throw a fit to me/
[]Good line...second was awkward to read...please dont do the whole "Gangsta Slang" its herbish...[]
Restricted:
I'ma Wrap My Mic Cord Around Ya Neck Cutting Off Ya Mic Source,
So Your Mute, And That Wack Teck-Neeks' Used By Herb-Whores/
[] Mmm first line is decent, kinda basic...not bad bar[]
This Ain't No Store, But I Will Write Ya Verse For You Fagget,
Atleast You'll Have Half A Chance, Know You Can't Hack It Fagget/
[]Ok would have been a pretty good bar if youg kept out the gay fagget repeate! Redundancy and repeats are SHITTTYYYYY!Y!!!!!! *Cant stress that 'nuff*[]
Spit 5 Bars, Shit I Only Need Two For The "King" To Keep Winning,
Like My 24 Inch Rims, My Punches Will Keep Ya Head Spinning/
[]Decent.[]
You Lack Everything An Emcee Has Used Since The Birth Of The Game,
Knowing You Lame, Battleing Me The Only Way You Getting Fame To Ya Name/
[]Good line. Good multis[]
Fuck What You Say, Your Lyrics So Wack, Decency Is Hard To Find Like Nemo,
Like Next Friday, Knocking This Puertorican Out From One Punch Like Debo/
[]Tyte line[]
Overall, Respect took it with More/Better mutli's, Punches, and Overall structure...
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