breakdown for hattrick:

flow: solid flow kinda simple but it would of made a good audio i'd give this 7/10 best part of the verse

volcab: reallly nothing special you need to work on this if you want to compete against the other guys on this board 4/10

punches: none... a couple of open swings but nothing that i think really connected try harder next time to really address your oppenent 3/10

overall:14/30 i think it was probably one of your first verse. and if so a good start just not good enough to get a win hee but keep trying

breakdown for bakerboy:

flow: a little shaky i had to read through it a few times to get it not horrible but could of used some work 6/10

volcab: you shined in some spots and it all seemed to fit in good without wrecking the flow definatly better then your oppenent 6/10

punches: again both of you didn't really address your oppenent like you should but you had a couple of alright lines like," throw da dictonary at his head,so he wont copy da word play of mine" 6/10

overall:18/30

vote--not the best battle as in punches but you both had pretty good mechanics jsut work on your punches. my vote is for bakerboy

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