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Old 03-17-04, 12:22 AM   #9
James West
Flyweight
 
Posts: 100
From: PHX
IP:

you killed him lyricalchick, this is the best verse I read from you so far, every line was good, and it had good structure, punches.

maze, your shit was good but the chicks was better this time around, but I thought you final 4 lines were better,

"I'm sure you got a good mouthpeice so lets put it in affect/
Have you told anyone bout your problem, you need water to get your pussy wet
I bet you got all types of toys just to make yourself nut/
Now you walk around funny cause the dildo gaot stuck in your butt"

the rest of the verse it just wasnt enouph to win.

Vote - Lyricalchick86
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