I liked your stuff SV but the Nelly diss' were a bit overdone I chuckled the first time but it got a bit ghey.

prepare for war to come, four horsemen with swords and guns,
ridin' in to enforce that your corpse is gunned,

I really liked that good work, also I dint like the HEERREEE. Bit gay, next time you should use /'s to help with the flow of it. Not many multies etc. But you still get my vote.

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