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Old 03-17-04, 03:55 PM   #13
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check Dis...

BakerBoy: 6/10
Your Shit Was Aight, You Need To Add Dem Metaphors and Punches To Your Ish...I Was Feeling Ya Verse Though...You Did A Good Job..

Hattrick: 4/10
Your Ish Was Aight, But Your Structure Was Horrible and You Need To Use Better Word Usuage. You Need Mulits, Metas, and Vocab...You Came Decent..You Just Need To Elevate

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