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Old 03-18-04, 08:40 AM   #6
Issachar
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I kept putting off voting on this battle because there's so little there to vote on. Neither verse was impressive. On the whole, I think Unborn took this one by using a stronger rhyme scheme (in some places it's not quite as simplistic as it looks) and having a clearer sense of direction, whereas LC's stuff came off like a quick rant, parts of which didn't even make sense like the "handcuffs" line. Still, this is a small step up from the last verse of hers that I voted on. Keep workin' and gettin' stronger at this thing, y'all.