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Old 03-18-04, 08:52 AM   #24
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Ny1stunna broke this down correct. PRNelly did an acceptable battle verse but used some fairly played-out concepts (MJ) and didn't make his punches hard enough (DeNiro). I liked SuperV's opener pretty well, and he brought some nice complex multi's, but around the halfway point ("DERRRRRTY") his stuff really fell apart. The punches stopped connecting and stuff just didn't make as much sense in general. Only the rhyme scheme kept it going.

It's a vote for Supervillain, but he just about snatched defeat from the jaws of victory with this one.