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Old 03-18-04, 09:50 AM   #7
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for guyver4mk:

flow: the flow alright in spots you lose it though like lines 3,4,5,6 all over the place overall though not bad 6/10

volcab:nothing special but it's not over simple so alright 6/10

punchespen disses nothing that really hurt best line was, "Make you get the jist, fuck you up and break ya wankin wrist/" i'd give you 5/10

overall:17/30

breakdown for tru2it:

flow:same problem as your oppenent your first couple of bars were all over the place if you want big bars split them up with some multis still 6/10

volcab:better then your oppenent but still nothing really special keep trying here 7/10

punches:best line,"but b4 u get the chance imma leave u cooked like stew\" you did throw some alright punches were your oppenent didn't so you get the edge here 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--tru2it
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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league