breakdown for unbornrookie:

flow:alright straight nothing complex gets the job done for the verse 7/10

punches:great attention paid to your oppenent through the whole verse good job here my fav line, "'Cause you be fuckin yaself worse than hermaphroditic sex offendas /" i'd give you 8/10 keep up the work

volcab:nice use of rhyming words no simple shit like bat,cat,spat no overall you were solid on this 7/10

overall:22/30

breakdown for afterword:

flow: slick flow nice use of multis to tighten it up even more best part of your verse easy 9/10

punches:nothing really addressing your oppenent the weak point of your verse for sure and it's a shame too, cause otherwise it was a good verse 5/10

volcab:good use here no repeated rhyme words or anything too simple both of you did good here 7/10

overall:21/30

vote-- unborn rookie, it was really a close battle it was the punches that pull him away here both of you did well though

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