Check d.j em sce's Lines

see im a hands on type of nigga who get mo phisical then sex positions//
in this rap game all you be is a blemish in this lyrical exhibition//
you cant see me like midgets shoppin at big and tall,
see im a lite weight but still on the balance beam is the only time I take a fall//

There u got word play and a strong punchline better then any of $$UPREME's.

THis line below a good punch line.

like m.c hammer you no you cant touch dude cuz my rhyme book will crush you//
im on top I can see your community from a birds eye view//

And a strong final verse to finish it all of.

see my rhymes cumn smoother than when you beat yo meat wit lotion//
I got this notion that im a lyrical magician who will get you wishin for my ill rhymin potion//

See thast a proper verse, droping decent bars

Votes (should be) Conducted on:

personals: d.j em sce
punches: $$UPREME
Flow: d.j em sce
Multis: NEITHER!!!
Wordplay: d.j em sce
Lyrical Content: d.j em sce
Structure: d.j em sce
Content: d.j em sce

Its easy to say Over all ..... "D.j em sce"

(this is a well explained vote)

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