i changed my title !!
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breakdown for mike:
flow:straight and too the point nothing fancy which can be good for a battle and it works for this one good i'd give 6/10
volcab:solid good use of multi-sylable words, 7/10
punches:this is where you shined truly almost every bar attented to your oppenent and with a couple of solid punches you got real personal too. my fav was, "You ain’t no femcee, you more like Britney Spears//"Oops you lost again", go shop for cosmetics//" overall i'd give them 8/10
overall:21/30 nice punches and mechanics worked well too.
breakdown for lyricalchick:
flow: it was basic but stayed on all through the verse a good job done here, 7/10
punches: none really, it looked like you try with a couple of lines but you rapped about yourself too much for how short your verse was i can't quote anything nothing i really like here 3/10
volcab: really basic, which isn't bad if your gonna beef it up with punches. but you didn't so... yeah it was alright nothing great 5/10
overall:15/30
vote-- wasn't really close maybe in a topical where mechanics count for more i could see it being closer both did alright but Mike12ikeda gets my vote
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's
and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league
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