Flyweight
From: miami florida...the PIMP state |
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nice battle
lilrenegade-ur verse wasnt all that good...u had sum basic rhymin words that is played out...ur flow was good tho..rolled off my toungue nicely..and lose the paragraph form..it makes it harder to read n throws off ur flow...jus change thath it up n you should be on ur way to de top
rage-better verse than renegades...had a nice flow but the way u had it kinda threw me off n the flow...but managed to still flow it out...nice vocab n u had a better structure n form..jus do sum minor changes n u should be good to go
overall-good battle but my vote goes to rage cuz he had a better verse
v/rage
peace
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