breakdown for the pictureperfect:

flow: you didn't break your bars up too well which hurt the overall flow of the whole peice and the bars were really long without any mutlis, that's just some of the problems with your flow not great 4/10

volcab:this was alright i guess but it doesn't really matter that you used a good set of words when there really wasn't a clear rhyme structure. 5/10

punches: nothing really here too, you had a couple of small disses like, "quite on the contrary like showin up to yo girls virgin vigiana and noticing aint no cherry to pop. Cuz I got there first" i guess you did good on the mutlis with lines like that though i'll give you 6/10

overall:15/30 just not much in the mechanics department you really gotta up this your punches were kinda based on played topics too.

breakdown for the sinnister:

flow: the bars didn't really match up too well, you had a clearer rhyme structure then your oppenent which helps you get some points but still you need to work here 6/10

punches: played lines really more volient like killing him then anything real clever i liked, "Blow your brains to fragments while ya ligaments are still pace-ing/" cause it showed off some multis. 6/10

volcab: desipte some good lines like the punch quoted above this wasn't amazing but solid 6/10

overall:18/30

vote--overall both of you didn't do much swinging it's like watching a boxing match in the last couple of rounds when both fighters are tired and just trying to stay and there feet not throwing punches. but anyway sinnister gets my vote

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