breakdown for lk63:
flow: it was alright pretty basic could of been alot stronger though 6/10
volcab:not bad pretty good array here not much to say 7/10
punches:,good personals and the amount of punches was strong too deffinatly hurt godfather my fav line was,"This kid dropping nursery rhymes, wit a grade 3 Mentality" i'd give you 8/10
overall:21/30 good battle verse coulda upped the mechanics but the punches really worked well
breakdown for godfather:
flow:for what you got it isn't bad basic but it works 6/10
volcab:a good variety keep it up in future battles 6/10
punches:you lose in just the amount of punches cause you had such a short verse but you hurt him with what you did have like, "..cuz u abuse Grammar.. more then kids with Dsylexia..*" overall 7/10
overall:19/30 good verse the big problem was it was so much shorter then your oppenent and in turn he threw more punches
vote--lk63 like i said he had more punches and better personals
ps. vote on my battle
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