ya supreme your verse seemed cut short, decent punches but aint good enough compared to what d.j. dropped wit that tony the tiger line and big and tall thangs, he had more thought put into his punches. yours was more straight foward. another line like "IM A LYRICAL SOLDIER CAUSE I SPEAK THE TRUTH//
U WOULD THINK I HAD A PORN STAR THE WAY I GO HARD IN THE BOOTH//" i woulda gave it to ya, but ya both of you need to get more multies. and put more time and less stretched linse wit the multies.
vote-dj
this shits an honest vote, no hate
get some real votes on me and ricanelly's battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116470

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