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Old 03-19-04, 02:21 PM   #13
puertoricanelly
Rb's Teacher
 
Posts: 426
From: KILLAFORNIA
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ima give this shit to accomplishment. yur shit was koo, i liked the fat boy line that shit was funny as hell.just work on flow and keeping your shit making sense.

GUN; ur shit was wack. u need ta work on vocab flow and STRUCTUREEE!!!!!!! especially your structure it was boring to read

so vote goes to ..... ACCOMPLISHMENT
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