View Single Post
Old 03-20-04, 12:43 AM   #222
THa Supliah
New to RB
 
Posts: 11
IP:

speakin of fallin asleep, im crawlin bawlin to peep/
these lyrical unsurtanties ,with grammar deformeties/
using old school Conformity, rap errors are enormity/
Not close to exciting, your rhymes need rewriting--get wit it
you shouldnt be writin you should be biting admit it/

peace biatch