mad punches from both of ya in this one!
breakdown for thugzlife:
flow:great from start to finish the multis and rhyme shemce really brought out the flow great this was best part of the verse 9/10
volcab:some of it was kinda of basic but i can look past that with the flow so good 6/10
punches: another solid part of your verse you addressed your oppenent almost everybar my fav line,"Have ya body leekin blood like a Tampax Pearl" my only problem was like i said you almost rapped everybar about your oppenent you did talk abit too much about your self too. 7/10
overall:solid flow and a couple of personal hittin punches overall great verse 22/30
breakdown for preme:
flow:not near the level of thugz but you did well it seems like your verse was rushed and i guess that would explain the simple flow still not bad though 6/10
volcab:this was pretty average you shined in spots like,"Crews dangerous on da mic we more-than-mean//We all sick in da room like we in quarentine//I predict these bitches ain't fit for conflict//We stay strict with tha shit that we kick//" those bars showed off your best volcab i'd give you 6/10
punches:again both of you did a good job here i think thugz edged you out in this spot but you still had a couple of good ones like, "If you pan handled for a livin you couldn't make-change//" keep up battling 6/10
overall:18/30
vote-- thugzlife took this cause of his flow and bigger number of punches maybe if preme posted more bars it could of been closer? but this is how i feel
ps. please vote on my battles there gettin slept on like mad
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