yo this is my outtake,..

lyrical..you had an aiight flow nd as usual ya structure was there. You punches were ther but they just didnt hit hard enough but together wit ur personals they were all right..keep it up

dilettante..you had an ok flow but ur structure lacked. Your punches definetly didn't hit hard enough and neither did your personals..you might wanna check the rulkes before u drop ur verse next time...no feedin...but keep it up

v/lyrical

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