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Old 03-21-04, 08:30 AM   #7
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for spul:

flow:straight you threw a bar or two of mutlis at the start and had a nice rhyme shemce going but it kinda fell apart by the end still good enough to get some point though 7/10

volcabretty basic array of words here nothing special 5/10

punches:you had some real good ones like that 'a.d.d.' line my fav was,"At night you prolly fuck your gurl with a popsickle stick/" nice and personal with that one you did good here 9/10

overall:21/30 solid verse great punchlines

breakdown for young duke:

flow:the flow was alright in spots but i think it wa the third bar that kinda got a little big and threw the flow off still worked threw the rest of it though 6/10

volcab:no you didn't do well here at all you rhymed three bars with 'me' in a row expand your volcab exspecially if you want to ever do audio i give you 5/10

punches:this was your best point you had some solid personals and spent the whole verse putting spul down my fav was, "you see I'm the reason you still piss the bed and cant sleep at night," you just spent the verse degrading him something horrible 9/10

overall:20/30

vote--tight battle both swing to hurt with the punches but in the end spul had a slight edge with his flow and volcab and got the win there
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