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Old 03-21-04, 12:02 PM   #9
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From: The bottom of the bottoms
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latin kitten has this one for punches and a good starter, but the end was shakie and some lines didnt make sence.

jixi u had flow and structure, what one of u had the other one hadn't, and u had a crapy start and end. u had good ryhming words. but it didn't take me.

vote~latinkitten
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