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close battle here's my vote:
breakdown for guyver4mk:
flow:at first glance i thought that maybe your flow had gotten away from you but then i read and saw you got a couple of basic multis in those long bars to help give strength to the flow overall not bad 7/10
volcab:solid threw the whole peice you didn't look to be trying too hard or not at all nothing really to say good job 7/10
punches:there was a good amount of them most of them seemed to hurt to a couple seemed a little to general but, overall good job my fav line, "You weaker than a diss that come from that wigga fred durst/" you lose abit for those lines with the math what was that 9X2 shit? don't see where that hurt but... 6/10
overall:20/30 alittle more in the punch department and you could of done alot better but solid verse
breakdown for daclassic:
flow:slick just great you filled the better of the bars with a nice amount of multis overall best part of your verse 8/10
volcab:not a bad use no single sylable rhyming here keep it up 8/10
punches:not bad most of them address your oppenent well my fav was,"sshh im droppin this, crazy, ya rhyme vocab compared to babies" really shit on his ability i give 8/10
overall:24/30 this is a great battle verse
vote--daclassic took it with flow and punches
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