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Old 03-21-04, 09:32 PM   #7
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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breakdown for restricted:

flow:slick rhyming solid rhyme structure that you stay with from start to finish without hurting you amount of punches keep up the work 9/10

volcab:the first couple of bars were strong but threw out the rest you started to weaken still stronger then your oppenent 7/10

punches:my fav even though kinda played, "Cold-Hearted, I'ma Suck Out Your Soul, Till You Have Nerve-Disease Like Christopher Reeves," you had some other good ones to like that weed one overall good job 7/10

overall:23/30 overall from start to end this is great keep up the work

breakdown for impendance:

flow:basic but good i don't know i guess you should improve here i give 6/10

volcab:really nothing special you could really use uppin this 6/10

punches:best line,"Its like pearl harbour, im the Japanese and your my dock/" weak but it was your best up this big time if you want to win battles against anyone but maybe weak newbies 5/10

overall:17/30 would of been an alright openmic but aside from that weak

vote-- restricted better punches
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