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Old 03-21-04, 10:20 PM   #13
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Aight Check Dis...

Limited Edition: 5/10
Flow Was Scratchy, and Your Structure Was Weak. Punches Were Alright But You Need To Use Better Vocab, Metaphors, Multis, and Get Your Word Usuage Down. Elevate Man.

Weezly Snypes: 4/10
I Dunno Where Your Punches Where Heading, But The Missed Far Off Target. Your Whole Verse Was Misplaced. Please Elevate. You Need Everything: Metaphors, Structure, Vocab, Multis, Word Usuage, Structure, Flow, and Skill.

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