DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP:
Aight Check Dis...
Limited Edition: 5/10
Flow Was Scratchy, and Your Structure Was Weak. Punches Were Alright But You Need To Use Better Vocab, Metaphors, Multis, and Get Your Word Usuage Down. Elevate Man.
Weezly Snypes: 4/10
I Dunno Where Your Punches Where Heading, But The Missed Far Off Target. Your Whole Verse Was Misplaced. Please Elevate. You Need Everything: Metaphors, Structure, Vocab, Multis, Word Usuage, Structure, Flow, and Skill.
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