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Old 03-22-04, 10:13 AM   #3
DirtBoy69
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From: Kincardine Ontario
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brekdown for regulator:

flow:alittle sloppy i think it could of been abit stronger 6/10

volcabretty good maybe if you balanced this with the line size the flow could of been tighten up but this was alright 6/10

punches:some good lines like,"The Way I Expose Ya Tissue You Would Think I Worked For Kleenex..[" i was laughing with that overall good job 7/10

overall:19/30 alright battle verse

breakdown for gambino:

flow:it was there kinda of basic but overall good job 7/10

volcab:like the flow you did some alright work but nothing worth too much 6/10

punches:great punches here too i liked,"I'll treat you like mechanical pencils and fill you with lead//" you addressed yourr oppenent well 7/10

overall:20/30

vote--gambino takes this in my eyes more lines and better punches
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