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Old 03-22-04, 10:26 AM   #12
DirtBoy69
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breakdown for war monger:

flow:slick nice use of the multis through out the peice overall great flow 8/10

volcab:again the multis weren't basic no nice size and wide variety of words used great work 8/10

punches:good punches some played topics like my fav line,"Pulling out prewrites like the tweezers to when he masturbates …" but it still worked and they addressed him and bullied him around like it was on the school yard good job 7/10

overall:23/30 good battle

breakdown for just blaze:

flow:bars all over the place in size little or no multis and most of the bars didn't even rhyme 3/10

volcab:average nothing special 5/10

punches:it's odd that the best lines from both of you came from played out topics but hey, my fav line here was, "yo whole squad is full of jerks, like masturbation" weak but best you had the only line that really did any damage 5/10

overall:13/30 little rhyming and not much of punches

vote--war monger just clearly a better verse
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