yo man....
Dis was dope....
Ur vocab was very good and flowed nicly...
structure was there....
Try some mulit' to get it realy goin dawg...
But dis was real nice from you....
Keep it up....
Pz out.....
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Yo HeXeN More Ture Than A Felection
More Gifted Than Christmas
Minds So Unclear Like Third World Water