Daclassic these are battles and u didnt have any punches, u aint gettin my vote. u could be good wit the flow and multie's but put that shit to a structure. also it looked like u was feedin on there, and that was in the rules that u couldn't.
L.I. came pretty weak but didn't need to come strong against a newbie, not to many punches, but u had a few good lines of word play like
"Coulda written 8 lines and wouldve been given the victory....
But u aint worth my time, to me your history"
best verse and was your closer, alright there. sumin u need to work on is takin more then 5 mins for a spit even if u goin agianst a newbie, show what level u on at all times, and dont talk about yourself as much in the battle like in the opener and
"But skill aint a sin and this is why i win....
First lines i had u pinned i just took your for a spin...."
alright but need more punches
vote. - L.I.

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