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Old 03-22-04, 06:56 PM   #5
Daclassic
If thats what you thought
 
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From: I.Q. of a Genius
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jus me: aight your structure was a little off...and punchlines i couldnt really understand well if u had any. flow was okay...ya vocab was okay too

accomp:...i believe this was an easy win due to that fact that your punchlines hit harder. and your structure i liked a little bit better...ya opener was great it kept me readin.

v/accomp

please return the favor and vote for my battles....guyver4mk vs dclassic and dclassic vs L.I. both are the the first page of front line jus run down the list
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